AxA story page 57

posted January 15th, 2013, 1:55 pm


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January 15th, 2013, 1:58 pm

CAMLOST

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at last first page of chapter three :D

feel free to correct my grammar

and happy new year to everyone :D

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January 15th, 2013, 5:53 pm

CreamandCookies

Very nice!

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Your grammar is just fine! I love the story so far!!

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January 15th, 2013, 9:35 pm

Sofysenpai

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Yay! Yeah it sounds fine, though Instead of can't it would sound a bit better it if she said "I should be happy but I'm not. :3

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January 16th, 2013, 4:04 am

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good page~ you really know how to build one up with settings and close-ups :)

happy new year~

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