AxA story page 65

posted September 9th, 2013, 12:34 am


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September 9th, 2013, 12:34 am

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page 65 :D

Feel free to correct my grammar :D

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September 10th, 2013, 4:46 am

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I hope so too ;__;

only some small corrections this time :)
How has everything been with your mom? (been and everything change place)
Did you tell her about college? (told = tell)
Luckly = Luckily

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September 14th, 2013, 10:29 pm

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@jonasfx: thanks, I'm going to change it :)

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